Sweet Better Finesse

Her sweet lips cross my bitter soul in such a great finesse.
a finesse that could only be explained by bitter saliva secreted
from the sweetest tongue. Sweeter than a mirriors finesse as it shows 
Bitter's reflectiion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 25, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Bobby, enjoyed reading your poem today. ,Thank you for sharing your words. Hope to see you post again.... *SKAT*
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August 21, 2012 at 5:34 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bobby. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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August 20, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Bobby, welcome to P-Soup - You write good - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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