Notes About The Poem

Sweet Awakening

Warmly
Mildly
Timely
Sweetly
Ushering in dawn warmly, mildly
Timely, birds sing me a song, sweetly


Date written and posted: 11/25/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Wonderful cadence to this one, Edward, culminating in the sweetest singing, that of birds. (Sigh. We forget sometimes just how sweet it really is. Thanks for the reminder.) ~ Gershon
Ibeh Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you for the continued support, Gershon!:-) Much love...
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:28 PM
absolutely charming Edward:-) we went on a walk with a group today and we saw many different sea birds :-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:35 PM
That is so cool, Jan!:-) Birds are the true wonders of nature! Thanks for the comments and visit!*hugs*
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