David O'Haolin Whalen Poet Ode

Sweet As Wine

Rain washed air…sweet as wine
The rain itself a sure footed dancer
Showers of silver…mist so fine
Quiet as questions that have no answers

Distant thunder that tears asunder
The fragile silence that falls in tatters
As if the world is stunned in wonder
And the pearls of rain are all that truly matters

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Skat A May 12, 2015 at 12:29 PM such a lovely write, enjoyed :) ~luv skat~

Afolabi Muideen May 12, 2015 at 1:39 AM What an interesting write David, I like your poem........line 6_7 the fragile silence that falls in tatters as if the world is stunned in wonder,excellent write 7! and a fav.