Jack Horne Poet Alliteration

Sweep Soft Snowflakes

She said: ‘Sweep soft snowflakes this sunny Sunday -
Synthetic sleet, you see, from Slava’s Snow Show!’

My wife and mother managed to read it slowly.

(About my day at work for Gwendolen's contest)

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Doris Culverhouse October 8, 2011 at 9:48 AM by the way....did you see the picture on poetry soup?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 7, 2011 at 11:28 AM thankxx Jack for all your sweet and kind comments luv.. hoping u and Sue have a fantastic weekend luv.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 6, 2011 at 4:49 PM Gwendolen's contest sure is giving our tongues a workout haha :) enjoyed this one as well Jack-- and congrats on all your wins :) I wish you the best in the contest :D

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2011 at 4:22 PM short but with some good tongue twisting, jack. I like it!!

Judy Ball October 6, 2011 at 4:01 PM A really cute little tongue twister my friend. It really made me smile. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2011 at 7:07 PM Great Alliteration that reads like a winner to me..Wonderful way of sharing your work experiences in a tongue twister..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for taking time to review my work.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 3, 2011 at 11:50 AM wow Jack this is a great Alliteration tongue twister luv.. good luck in the contest.. I entered an old one Do Doggie Do ... which won in another contest last year .so hope Gwen likes it too..luv..

Nancy Jones October 2, 2011 at 6:14 PM Good one! Had to say it a few times before I could get through it without trippin'. Luckerooni~N

Russell Sivey October 2, 2011 at 4:57 PM Great tongue twister...I can't do any of them very well, but yours is very good, it makes me stutter! Awesome job!!

Carolyn Devonshire October 2, 2011 at 3:29 PM :) Big smiles, Jack. I know you've really been sweeping "synthetic sleet" at the theater. Gwen will love it too! Best wishes and love, Carolyn

Tony Lane October 2, 2011 at 3:09 PM Sorta says something. Soon snow swirls. Tony