Sweep

Countrymen take stand
Hard to broom from where they land
Gritty like course sand


By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 6, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Cool Senryu Robb and strong first line ... enjoyed reading your creative write today... luv. "Sweetheart"
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May 6, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Can't help but think of "Braveheart" with this one, Robb. No one made a stronger stand than Wallace. Excellent senryu! My mom died January 24, 1984. When I referred to "this time of year," I was talking about the approach of Mothers Day. Love, Carolyn
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