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Time to head off to the gym, for my daily work out session Tummy bulging, thighs are wobbling, my body is in regression Once I was toned and oh so slim But the lure of sweets just sucked me in Chocolate and biscuits are my downfall A bag of ‘Minstrels’ I will eat them all Here in the gym I am working up a sweat … Sweets and chocolate I must forget So I do my aerobics class and then have a swim Do fifty lengths – oh I must be getting slim Then off for a circuit class, oh I do work hard For I want to look so sexy in my purple leotard After all that exercise I’ve worked up a healthy appetite Grab a bag of fries – no wonder my clothes feel so tight! 06~15~15 Sweats and Sweets Contest – Olive E Guillermo

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Rachel Preston

Date: 7/11/2015 11:05:00 AM

Very good - every girl needs a diet poem. :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2015 11:11:00 AM

LOL I have NEVER been on a diet in my life I am petite UK size 8 infact with recent stress in my life I have actually lost more weigh:-( hugs Jan xx

Shonima Burman

Date: 6/24/2015 11:12:00 AM

nice one Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:13:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/19/2015 12:49:00 PM

Entertaining and witty...the way Jan does it, and with lovely rhyme, too:) I must assure the readers that the person in the poem is not the one I know!:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2015 1:08:00 PM

aww Paul you are too kind lol :-) Hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/18/2015 8:50:00 PM

Jan, I really enjoy rhyming poems and funny poems. I just got both! I love it, and as one whose thigh is as big as her waist used to be, I can also relate! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2015 1:58:00 AM

I LOVE to write with humour and have tried to include it in the majority of poems I've written since I joined here in 2015:-) Hug Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/18/2015 9:27:00 AM

Excellent pen Jan! This one surely made me grin from ear to ear, lol...So funny and fun to read:) Well done!I enjoyed it!A 7!Wishing you a lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 9:45:00 AM

Thanks so much Dorian - just went for a fun write not sure if it is what Olive and James are after:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2015 12:38:00 PM

GREAT job. I did a similar theme for this one, but have been waiting forever to post it because I don't have many people seeing previous poems posted! I sure hope she likes this one. You worked hard on it.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2015 1:00:00 PM

LOl I didn't work hard on it Andrea it took less than 15 mins to pen!:-) Just went for a fun write as I really wanted to put something together so I could support Olive's contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Diane M Quinlan

Date: 6/16/2015 9:48:00 AM

This gave me a chuckle Sweety you must have sweat this one out! Very good use of word play. Enjoyed this read thanks for sharing.....didee

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Diane - just a fun write - I haven't set foot in a gym in years lol - i just wanted to support Olive's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/15/2015 11:40:00 PM

How cute, Jan! I really should get to the gym...LOL. I love your take on the theme. I keep starting to write for this contest, but I come up empty.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/16/2015 1:15:00 AM

I want to support her contest too. Maybe I need to look for some sweets or break a sweat...right now I need some sleep.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2015 1:11:00 AM

I struggled with a theme and am not sure 'rhyme' is an acceptable form but I wanted to support Olive so I penned a humourous poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/15/2015 9:44:00 PM

Very nicely penned Jan...best wishes in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/15/2015 7:26:00 PM

Aha ! the perfect mix of sweats and sweets !!! The older we get, the more we need to sweat to be sweet !!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2015 1:08:00 AM

Thanks Carrie - just thought I would have a bit of fun - doubt it will place but we need some amusement on here! Hugs jan xx