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Sweats and Sweets-

I'll don the sweats and give up sweets,
if my reward’s an angel's kiss.
My girlfriend set the goals to meet,
I'll don the sweats and give up sweets.
Her gentle love will be my treat, 
she promised me a night of bliss.
I'll don the sweats and give up sweets,
if my reward’s an angel's kiss.

She promised me a night of bliss,
five pounds is all I have to lose.
I feel this is too good to miss,
she promised me a night of bliss.
I have to take a shot at this,
I’ll lose the weight and drop the booze.
She promised me a night of bliss,
five pounds is all I have to lose.

An intertwining Triolet written May 25th, 2015 for contest “Sweats And Sweets”

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/30/2015 6:14:00 PM Hi Emile. Congrats on your SWEATS AND SWEETS win. LOVE LINDA Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 7/1/2015 8:01:00 AM Thanks so much Linda, as always I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.

Skat A Date: 6/30/2015 12:11:00 AM Emile, this is a nice sweet win *Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 6/30/2015 9:23:00 AM Thanks so much SKAT, as always I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.

Ralph Sergi Date: 6/28/2015 6:24:00 PM Am awesome poem, Emile, My compliments on your win! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 6/29/2015 9:57:00 AM Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Eve Roper Date: 6/28/2015 5:22:00 PM Congratulations, Emile, on this wonder piece a 7 Hugs Eve Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 6/29/2015 10:02:00 AM Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Paul Callus Date: 6/28/2015 4:27:00 PM Pleased to be back to confirm my initial reaction to this winning entry, Emile! Congratulations!! // paul Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 6/29/2015 10:03:00 AM Thanks Paul, I appreciate it. Emile.

James Fraser Date: 6/28/2015 3:28:00 PM Many congratulations Emile on your placing in Olive's contest, James :) :)" Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 6/29/2015 10:03:00 AM Thanks James, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/28/2015 10:32:00 AM Emile, the lil humor yet really sweet, the flow is just fluid and enough to tickle my thoughts! Really elegant and cute..CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 6/28/2015 2:34:00 PM Thanks so much Olive, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest. Emile.

Funom Makama Date: 5/27/2015 7:26:00 AM I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/27/2015 8:25:00 AM Thanks so much Funom, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Robert Lindley Date: 5/26/2015 8:33:00 AM A very creative and well written poem. Love the humor in it . I simply have to have my nutter butter peanut butter sandwhich cookies! A7.... a delight to read this fine morn my friend. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/26/2015 8:54:00 AM Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Paul Callus Date: 5/26/2015 6:56:00 AM Excellent Emile! The flow is lovely and catchy; the content lively and humourous. #7 // paul Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/26/2015 7:02:00 AM Thanks Paul, I appreciate your visits and comments. Emile.

Skat A Date: 5/25/2015 8:46:00 PM a fun read, enjoyed .. *always, S.K.A.T.* Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/26/2015 7:00:00 AM Thanks SKAT, as always I appreciate your visits. Emile.

Laura Leiser Date: 5/25/2015 6:26:00 PM Perfect, Emile! I was thinking of a similar idea for this subject, but you beat me to it (and yours is probably much better, anyway!) Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/25/2015 7:14:00 PM Thanks Laura, I hope you go ahead and write you poem , I would like to read it. Emile.

Jan Allison Date: 5/25/2015 3:57:00 PM love the clever write and the humour here Emile - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/25/2015 4:02:00 PM Thanks as always Jan, you bring me a few moments of joy every day. Emile.