Emile Pinet Poet Triolet

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Sweats and Sweets-

I'll don the sweats and give up sweets,
if my reward’s an angel's kiss.
My girlfriend set the goals to meet,
I'll don the sweats and give up sweets.
Her gentle love will be my treat, 
she promised me a night of bliss.
I'll don the sweats and give up sweets,
if my reward’s an angel's kiss.

She promised me a night of bliss,
five pounds is all I have to lose.
I feel this is too good to miss,
she promised me a night of bliss.
I have to take a shot at this,
I’ll lose the weight and drop the booze.
She promised me a night of bliss,
five pounds is all I have to lose.

An intertwining Triolet written May 25th, 2015 for contest “Sweats And Sweets”

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Poet Destroyer A June 30, 2015 at 6:14 PM Hi Emile. Congrats on your SWEATS AND SWEETS win. LOVE LINDA Emile Pinet July 1, 2015 at 8:01 AM Thanks so much Linda, as always I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.

Skat A June 30, 2015 at 12:11 AM Emile, this is a nice sweet win *Hugs* SKAT Emile Pinet June 30, 2015 at 9:23 AM Thanks so much SKAT, as always I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.

Ralph Sergi June 28, 2015 at 6:24 PM Am awesome poem, Emile, My compliments on your win! Emile Pinet June 29, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Eve Roper June 28, 2015 at 5:22 PM Congratulations, Emile, on this wonder piece a 7 Hugs Eve Emile Pinet June 29, 2015 at 10:02 AM Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Paul Callus June 28, 2015 at 4:27 PM Pleased to be back to confirm my initial reaction to this winning entry, Emile! Congratulations!! // paul Emile Pinet June 29, 2015 at 10:03 AM Thanks Paul, I appreciate it. Emile.

James Fraser June 28, 2015 at 3:28 PM Many congratulations Emile on your placing in Olive's contest, James :) :)" Emile Pinet June 29, 2015 at 10:03 AM Thanks James, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 28, 2015 at 10:32 AM Emile, the lil humor yet really sweet, the flow is just fluid and enough to tickle my thoughts! Really elegant and cute..CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa Emile Pinet June 28, 2015 at 2:34 PM Thanks so much Olive, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest. Emile.

Funom Makama May 27, 2015 at 7:26 AM I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7! Emile Pinet May 27, 2015 at 8:25 AM Thanks so much Funom, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Robert Lindley May 26, 2015 at 8:33 AM A very creative and well written poem. Love the humor in it . I simply have to have my nutter butter peanut butter sandwhich cookies! A7.... a delight to read this fine morn my friend. Emile Pinet May 26, 2015 at 8:54 AM Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Paul Callus May 26, 2015 at 6:56 AM Excellent Emile! The flow is lovely and catchy; the content lively and humourous. #7 // paul Emile Pinet May 26, 2015 at 7:02 AM Thanks Paul, I appreciate your visits and comments. Emile.

Skat A May 25, 2015 at 8:46 PM a fun read, enjoyed .. *always, S.K.A.T.* Emile Pinet May 26, 2015 at 7:00 AM Thanks SKAT, as always I appreciate your visits. Emile.

Laura Leiser May 25, 2015 at 6:26 PM Perfect, Emile! I was thinking of a similar idea for this subject, but you beat me to it (and yours is probably much better, anyway!) Good luck in the contest :) Emile Pinet May 25, 2015 at 7:14 PM Thanks Laura, I hope you go ahead and write you poem , I would like to read it. Emile.

Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 3:57 PM love the clever write and the humour here Emile - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 Emile Pinet May 25, 2015 at 4:02 PM Thanks as always Jan, you bring me a few moments of joy every day. Emile.