Sweating in Summer

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06/30/25

       In scorching summer gathered flock of sheep 
       Under the blazing rays each to sweat deep.
                       All sweating profusely.
                       Got confused totally.
    Just quenched thirst on sweat of other to sip.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2025 11:29:00 AM

Gross. I hope it wasn't too salty. Haha. Nicely done!