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06/30/25

 

 

Sweating in Summer

       In scorching summer gathered flock of sheep 
       Under the blazing rays each to sweat deep.
                       All sweating profusely.
                       Got confused totally.
    Just quenched thirst on sweat of other to sip.
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Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Gross. I hope it wasn't too salty. Haha. Nicely done!
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