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Sweating in Summer

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06/30/25

 

 

In scorching summer gathered flock of sheep Under the blazing rays each to sweat deep. All sweating profusely. Got confused totally. Just quenched thirst on sweat of other to sip.

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Date: 6/30/2025 11:29:00 AM
Gross. I hope it wasn't too salty. Haha. Nicely done!
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