Sweat

Sweat ruled as I tried to draw near,
When I got an eyeful of you.
Each moment then, passed by in fear.
Although if too shy, then I would rue,
The gift life blessed me to pursue!

feelingsfirst lovequintain (english)

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Panagiota Romios

October 27, 2023 at 5:44 PM

10/28. Congratulations.I am back to say, I am glad for you. Panagiota

Linda Alice Fowler

October 9, 2023 at 8:33 AM

A fun choice of word David, and a fun write. Well done! Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Thanks for partipating in my contest and congrats, David. It's interesting for me what you used to illustrate Sweat!

Deb M

September 27, 2023 at 8:13 AM

Ha David l like this relatable tale….some sweat, some go red and some get tongue tied!! Debx

Panagiota Romios

September 25, 2023 at 5:27 PM

A simple response from me, I think I used to pant more than sweat. And was far from shu! Retired wild one,with no advice, I sense you to be more than intelligent.)) Pangie xx Well penned Quintain! 2penned