Sweat

Summer sand soft and sultry,
Salty sweat, sweet and wet.
Wistless wind, waveless water,
Bathers baking, basking burning
Seagull scavenger of shiny sea
Searching, scurrying squabling over scraps.
Wandering women walk with will
Wondering why weight won’t wither.
Trembling toddlers take tentative steps
Towards towering tidal tempest
Cumulonimbus clouds clearing
Silent sky screaming
Silken sunlight streaming
Doting Dad daydreaming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sietesantos Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Hi Jeff, this piece is loaded with very artful alliteration! You have indeed mastered this form! BRAVO! Hugs. Pandita
Kantor Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Many tx Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Lovely alliteration, Jeff. Totally charming. Ah those summer days. Well penned.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace