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Sweat

Summer sand soft and sultry, Salty sweat, sweet and wet. Wistless wind, waveless water, Bathers baking, basking burning Seagull scavenger of shiny sea Searching, scurrying squabling over scraps. Wandering women walk with will Wondering why weight won’t wither. Trembling toddlers take tentative steps Towards towering tidal tempest Cumulonimbus clouds clearing Silent sky screaming Silken sunlight streaming Doting Dad daydreaming

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Date: 4/26/2018 8:38:00 AM
Hi Jeff, this piece is loaded with very artful alliteration! You have indeed mastered this form! BRAVO! Hugs. Pandita
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/14/2018 11:26:00 PM
Many tx Pandita
Date: 4/25/2018 9:23:00 PM
Lovely alliteration, Jeff. Totally charming. Ah those summer days. Well penned.
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