Swaying

tenderly on the breeze these branches sway locked together like lovers in the embrace of a close dance suddenly my thoughts are adrift again

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/15/2019 4:38:00 AM

Wonderful.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2019 7:29:00 PM

thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2019 10:43:00 AM

Oh this is lovely!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim...hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2019 10:13:00 AM

Adrift again, romantic thoughts - the branches of a tree that are interlocked is such a beautiful way to describe two lovers. Brilliant poem Sandra, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer...

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:48:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer...i love watching nature and trying to create images from it in my mind... hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/14/2019 6:58:00 AM

Lovely, dear lady. Love it. God bless you, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina... love and hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 11/13/2019 8:53:00 PM

Beautiful image, my friend. How easily we can be swept away when we allow ourselves to be ~ Lovely <3

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 5:00:00 AM

Sometimes we need to allow our minds to imagine things. Nature makes it easy .. thank you so much HT:) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2019 8:17:00 PM

The more one reads this poem, the more one's mind drifts. Interesting! :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... nature is fun to watch and imagine... hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2019 6:59:00 PM

Divine! as always.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 8:21:00 PM

thank you :) hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2019 5:31:00 PM

oh how beautiful is this Sandra I love the idea of the branches being locked in an embrace:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 6:33:00 PM

thank you so much Jan... the things you see within a mind when you spend much of your day watching nature... hugs :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/13/2019 4:31:00 PM

That's the way, beautifully put.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:52:00 PM

Thank you ML :) hugs

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/13/2019 3:15:00 PM

Very nice poem, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:52:00 PM

thank you so much Mike :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 2:53:00 PM

As are mine after reading this beautifully crafted poem. Wow and sigh...to see through your eyes must be the most magical thing...I absolutely loved this.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:51:00 PM

you have to look for the beauty in everything...you know that though because your poems are always beautiful... thank you so much my friend... hugs :)