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Sway With Me

SWAY WITH ME Stand right here. Look at me. I know you do not dance. I will dance around you, then put your hands around my waist when I get in front of you, sway and gaze at me. 6/8/21 Waltz Wave Contest Kim Merryman Used: How Many Syllables

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/26/2021 7:47:00 PM

So delightful and playful! Congrats on your win, Marilene

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/27/2021 10:08:00 AM

Thanks so much! I appreciate it. Have a great Sunday!

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/26/2021 1:44:00 PM

Marilene, your dance instructions were cute and flowed well with this form! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/26/2021 3:29:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim for my placement and compliments. Have a blessed week-end.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/24/2021 6:07:00 PM

I feel the music of your step, congrats dear poet :)

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/24/2021 6:50:00 PM

Ohhh, you're really a poet!!! I feel like dancing... thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2021 5:51:00 PM

ahh, so nice, and I like that you used it for actual dance the way I did too. Congrats for your win

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/24/2021 6:48:00 PM

I was really going to write 'Waltz with Me"; but the guy I like does not dance, he just watches me dance while he plays his guitar with his band. I think he could at least sway with me.

Terry Flood

Date: 6/24/2021 3:08:00 PM

So that's the slow dance sorted... now, teach me to boogie on down ;-) Marilene, I can quite vividly imagine such a scene. Congrats on a worthy winner. Terry

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/24/2021 3:14:00 PM

Thanks, so much Terry. I would really like to boogie on down, Rock and Roll, Swing, twist, jerk, mash potato. I do boogie down every other Friday night, so much fun.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/8/2021 5:36:00 PM

Hi Marlene, You rose to the challenge with your entry. I like how you tied “ dance” into your write. Is it a waltz?I found it to be well-written and romantic. I enjoyed the dance. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/8/2021 6:54:00 PM

Hello, Alexis. I have a big project I'm working on so I have not really written lately. For some reason, I feel like taking a break and kind of wanting to dance waltz; but I decided to just imagine and pen a poem. Have a nice evening.