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Sway

Flower girl Nice and easy Sweet and breezy Looks like a summer eve Wild flowers in bold colors Flirty smile,make believe Her seduction schemes Renoir romantic, In his dreams Daylight He awakens His heart's been taken Her honey girl kisses sweet With her seductive persuasion Wine and romantic elation He'll be married soon By sway of moon Goodnight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/1/2016 6:09:00 PM
I love seeing how you got Sway for your title. That was the cutest line in this set of ninettes. By sway of moon. very nice poem.
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Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 PM
I was taught in writing v a book that first and last chapters must capture attention. And Titles chosen in any writing. Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 6/1/2016 9:51:00 AM
Very lovely poem, Cheryl. You seem to be new to PS. Welcome to a great time here. Look forward to see some fine poetry from you. ~karam~
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Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 6/1/2016 8:16:00 PM
I'm new here a Second time. Been all over writing. Just tried this again after my long interruption . Very sure circumstances had me unable to write for what I thought would be forever. Apparently I've recovered enough to try it again. Thanks for encouraging me. I have to adjust.

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