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You arrived on a splendid December day, as I recall. I relived when we came home; I let out a large sigh. I put my elbows on the overhang facing a mountain wall. I sighed again vowed to be with you till you rise to the sky. I sighed as we had to migrate to find a brighter future. However, you are scared to chime out of your safety zone. I sigh when you left our house and rejoin with your ruder. My frequent sighs are for the sake of my child's shone. At the point when you chose to wed, I hopped for bliss. You acted accurately in picking a high erudite young lady. Recall your cracked tone telling me you had a boy you relish. "I'm relocating for my child," you sighed as I moved away. If time was a ritual and you were doled of a gold spoon. I would be careless if I denied your grace to the moon. Some emotions, such as rain, are as rare as a typhoon. Candor and anxiety of others are expected when done. Father, you may not attempt to strive or be dispersed. You are an idealist; that hurts me to witness your sigh. Halting and the peak of the emotion are vividly defined. From the heart, I'm yet motivated by facts and nigh. I sigh as I ponder on the past with suffering. When I'm in front of my parents grave, I cry. I sigh again as I reckon of individuals in my living. My sigh was a combination of relief and ecstasy.
Written July 11, 2021

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Date: 7/17/2021 3:37:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Your sigh of relief with ecstasy is felt... God bless you.
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Date: 7/17/2021 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Beata, appreciated your kind words, blessings and kindest regards
Date: 7/15/2021 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative story/write. Wonderful picture. Wish I was on the beach. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 7/14/2021 11:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/14/2021 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Lassad
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:00:00 AM
You have a beautiful soul! Congratulations, Lasaad!
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Date: 7/14/2021 9:53:00 AM
My sigh was a combination of relief and ecstasy. Beautifully penned. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:09:00 AM
This is so deep, emotional and intense, Lasaad. It is a marvelous creation, and quite an impressive contest entry. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Evelyn; your kind words are so much appreciated. Blessings and best regards
Date: 7/12/2021 10:41:00 AM
Sometimes pondering on the past makes us cry... So emotional and well penned dear Lasaad...Have a great day... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thanks, Anitha. I appreciate your sweet words...they really touched my bottomless heart.//Las
Date: 7/12/2021 9:29:00 AM
The raw natural imagery you use here, is so well balanced with the raw natural emotions of your poem Lasaad, the recurring theme of the sigh, meaning so many different things, comes together so well in your final ambivalent line, a great contender for the contest, cheers David
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, David. I'm happy that you enjoyed it; indeed, all the imagery is natural because every verse is accurate, and those sighs are actual. After leaving my dearest son to go for his road trip from the east coast to the west coast, I wrote this poem.
Date: 7/12/2021 2:06:00 AM
Rain brings about all sorts of emotions, but it is a life-affirming element....Delice
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:04:00 AM
True, Delice, and thank you for the delicious words and comments. Have a great day
Date: 7/11/2021 10:15:00 PM
Great expressive emotions in this poem. I'm sure this will rate high, it deserves it.
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor; your words are always sweet and uplifting.
Date: 7/11/2021 6:58:00 PM
Some emotions such as rain , can pour over us, and cause us so much pain, Nicely penned dear Lasaad, gl in the contest dear
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend, for reading and commenting
Date: 7/11/2021 2:27:00 PM
Emotive write, Lasaad. Feelings resonate in this write. All the best.
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Date: 7/11/2021 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your so kind words, dear friend Vijay. Your support is always appreciated. Blessings and best regards
Date: 7/11/2021 2:01:00 PM
- Your sigh ... is written with skill and emotion ... best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for your so precious comment, dear Anne-Lise; it's so much appreciated:)) warm hugs and kindest regards// Las

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