Swans - For One Liners Two Contest

SWANS


THE THRUMMING OF THEIR WINGS DREAMS DISTANT THINGS


12/5/2015

Submitted to One liners two – Poetry contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 9, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Congrats on your win John! Sorry this is late.
Merryman Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:39 PM
This is really good, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Negron Flores Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations John.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write John!
Gasun Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 10:10 PM
This is so great! I love it! Warm congrats on your win my dear friend! Hugs and cheers! <3Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 6:59 PM
this was REALLY a good one! Congrats on the winners' list.
Lawless Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Thanks Andrea.
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December 6, 2015 at 5:41 PM
John, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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December 6, 2015 at 8:16 PM
thanks Alexis
Lane Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 3:27 PM
well done, John...congratulations.
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December 6, 2015 at 8:16 PM
thanks Lin
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Dropping back with my congratsJohn:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:16 PM
thanks Jan
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December 6, 2015 at 2:32 PM
- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, John !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:15 PM
thank you Anne Lise
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December 6, 2015 at 2:26 PM
John, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT
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December 6, 2015 at 8:15 PM
thanks SKAT
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December 5, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Jan, I have had as many as six swans fly low over my head while fishing. It is an impressive "thrumming" sound full of power and purpose.
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:36 AM
lovely alliteration John good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Jan, I posted my reply in the comment box...more coffee please...
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