Swans Flight

The last wee fledgling
Is stretching her wings
She's flying the nest
To branch out and sing...
Her own song...
Mama bird though, is tearful , and bereft
Though she knows they're both grown
And need nests of their own
They've been getting ready to soar
Since before they were born
Sometimes they've been her only reason to live for...
And although mama bird
Made her fair share of mistakes
When wisdom wasn't always
There in plain sight
Her chicks they have given her
Heart reason to sing
Like beautiful Nightingale
Like magpies joy of bling
And as her grown swans 
Spread wings and take flight
Though it makes her heart sore
Their beauty in freedom
Makes life worth living for
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Troutman Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:50 PM
That is a beautiful poem!
Godwin Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:18 PM
What a great take on the 'empty nest' syndrome, but even so much deeper as you poetically touch on many parental emotions, especially those of letting go. A lovely, emotional poem and I thoroughly enjoyed it ... CayCay (this comment has nothing to do with you visiting me - it is truly lovely, Zoe)
Orrell Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 3:15 AM
Thank you all girls ,its a strange mixture of emotions, And really helps to express xxx
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