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A Bird Haiku set of two - Natured themed Poetry Contest Sponsored By Tania Kitchin 06/20/26

swans

swans swim silently gliding on pellucid pond sun peeks through grey clouds mute swans paired for life seven cygnets swim close by ~ the circle of life
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Godwin Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 4:20 AM
Beautiful. I didn't know swans mated for life. Maybe I know it and just don't know I do. Tim and I once lived with swans in the lake behind our apartment. Beautiful in water, they can look rather awkward when walking or pecking at their reflection in someone's car door (I had a good laugh over that.) I enjoyed the tranquil vibe and content in your Haikus. CayCay
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "swans." I love this one. What a wonderful write with great pictures. I am buried with work after being gone for 2 weeks. Have a blessed day with your win................
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 5:28 PM
Congrats, Jan. Circle of life was so sweet. Soupmail
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 1:24 PM
Jan, congratulations on your first place win with your delightful swan haiku's.
Pettit Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Your haikus accurately describe one of nature's most beautiful birds.
Daniel Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 1:17 AM
These are excellent, Jan:) sure, a winner:)
Bauer Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 1:59 PM
two very lovely haikus, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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