Swans

Swans 

Shimmering in the sun, 
silky skin glides pale ponds. 
Secrets spoken to ears, 
salty tears leave frail eyes.
Soft air swirls the boat’s sails.
Serene pictures of us,
slumbering at faint dusk.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:16 PM
Though this ended up being about two lovers perhaps? I really enjoyed the transition to the boat and the two slumbering at dusk. Those were my favorite lines. Congrats in my contest
Empress Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 4:08 AM
So beautiful how youv written on swans dear sabrina, i love the flow and how well youv described swans, and their silky skin gliding … i especially love “ Serene pictures of us, slumbering at faint dusk.” so dreamy! And stunning! Pleasure reading your Pleiades. Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
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