Swans


Serene lake frames cobalt,
Stirred by rolling ripples.
Shadows of autumn cloud
Sense the swings of white wings.
Soaring ivory fleet
Slowly descends to turn
Suddenly to spry swans.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara K
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Many thanks, Sara.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Swans" write. I love your pretty picture painted by your words. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 4:48 PM
Thanks for keeping it plural swans. Other beautiful swan entries changed to singular swan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 7:40 PM
I make many age-related mistakes, I am glad I made this one right. Thanks for the placement.
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 4:46 PM
That middle line is a wowser, Subimal. Congrats in my contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 7:38 PM
Thank you, Andrea for the placement.
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