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Swanly Fawn Upon a Pond

Skating so serene like a splendid, sliding swan upon an ice pond, softly as a spry sunrise at dawn, Shawn saw some splendid surprise, seemed soft as sleek chiffon, a sight so shrouded, light as snow white, a striking, sprightly fawn. 2/6/2020

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Date: 3/28/2021 6:03:00 AM
Wonderful write Juliet, love the second line..
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Date: 2/9/2020 11:04:00 AM
Sounds so serene...
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/9/2020 3:16:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One.
Date: 2/8/2020 11:13:00 PM
This poem is sheer bliss, Juliet! Fantastic alliteration. :=)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/9/2020 3:16:00 PM
Thanks, Evelyn. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/7/2020 11:14:00 AM
What a lovely image of the skater and the deer you created, Juliet. And I love the alliteration! You took me back to my childhood days skating on Lake Messer in Matawan. Some of my happiest moments were there. This delightful read goes to my faves. Hugs, Carolyn
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/9/2020 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, so much Carolyn. Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/7/2020 4:14:00 AM
Nice one. Life is so full of surprises. Kind wishes, Kai
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/7/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thanks, Kai. Just playing around with sounds. One time I saw a baby albino deer in the woods. I'm told they're super rare.

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