Juliet Ligon Poet Alliteration

Swanly Fawn Upon a Pond

Skating so serene like a splendid, sliding swan
upon an ice pond, softly as a spry sunrise at dawn,
Shawn saw some splendid surprise, seemed soft as sleek chiffon,
a sight so shrouded, light as snow white, a striking, sprightly fawn.


2/6/2020

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Joseph May March 28, 2021 at 6:03 AM Wonderful write Juliet, love the second line..

Silent One February 9, 2020 at 11:04 AM Sounds so serene... Juliet Ligon February 9, 2020 at 3:16 PM Thanks, Silent One.

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 8, 2020 at 11:13 PM This poem is sheer bliss, Juliet! Fantastic alliteration. :=) Juliet Ligon February 9, 2020 at 3:16 PM Thanks, Evelyn. I appreciate it.

Carolyn Devonshire February 7, 2020 at 11:14 AM What a lovely image of the skater and the deer you created, Juliet. And I love the alliteration! You took me back to my childhood days skating on Lake Messer in Matawan. Some of my happiest moments were there. This delightful read goes to my faves. Hugs, Carolyn Juliet Ligon February 9, 2020 at 3:14 PM Thanks, so much Carolyn. Glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Kai Michael Neumann February 7, 2020 at 4:14 AM Nice one. Life is so full of surprises. Kind wishes, Kai Juliet Ligon February 7, 2020 at 9:24 AM Thanks, Kai. Just playing around with sounds. One time I saw a baby albino deer in the woods. I'm told they're super rare.