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Abdul Malik Mandani

Swan Song

Lovelorn;
My love,
Breaking my heart,
Left me forever to
mourn.
Forlorn;
I Lament,
Singing the blues,
My pining heart pleads:
Return!


Dr. Ram Mehta's "Longing" contest.

Copyright © Abdul Malik Mandani | Year Posted 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

January 6, 2015 at 12:07 AM

There's no greater longing than a lost love. Wonderful cinquain, Abdul...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

January 2, 2015 at 11:18 PM

Abdul, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2015 at 2:10 PM

very nice one, abdul. Put pleads with final s near the end of the second one! congrats for your win.

Abdul Malik Mandani

January 2, 2015 at 3:29 PM

Got it! Thanks.

January 2, 2015 at 11:43 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx

January 2, 2015 at 3:17 AM

Congrats on the win Abdul, I am happy this good work made it to the top...huggs

Abdul Malik Mandani

January 2, 2015 at 3:33 PM

Thanks. Appreciate your comments.

January 1, 2015 at 9:38 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Abdul

Abdul Malik Mandani

January 2, 2015 at 3:31 PM

Thanks. Appreciate much. Wish the best of 2015 too.

December 20, 2014 at 4:49 PM

such an emotional write - I hope this does well for you you have captured the feeling so so well:-) Hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani

December 21, 2014 at 12:17 PM

Thanks Jan. Appreciate your comments.

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