Swan Song

She was the frog
I was the swan
She was the beauty
I, drowned in the pond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Short and Sweet!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:28 AM
I read the latest one first, then this one. I enjoyed both of them Arthur. Most people think of white swans when they picture them, but here in Hawaii we have a lot of black swans. Both are really a lovely subject for a poet to be inspired by.
Vaillancourt Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 10:10 PM
well penned...gives much for the reader to reflect upon whilst reading...
Nance Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Short and maybe not so sweet, but clever
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Haha...always the case here too
A. Sharma Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:46 AM
Oh read part two first, was amazing! Nice first part , that's how it started Arthur! Great write!
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