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Swan Song

She was the frog I was the swan She was the beauty I, drowned in the pond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/15/2014 10:33:00 PM
Short and Sweet!
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:28:00 AM
I read the latest one first, then this one. I enjoyed both of them Arthur. Most people think of white swans when they picture them, but here in Hawaii we have a lot of black swans. Both are really a lovely subject for a poet to be inspired by.
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Date: 9/13/2014 10:10:00 PM
well penned...gives much for the reader to reflect upon whilst reading...
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:09:00 AM
Short and maybe not so sweet, but clever
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:22:00 AM
Haha...always the case here too
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Date: 9/13/2014 12:46:00 AM
Oh read part two first, was amazing! Nice first part , that's how it started Arthur! Great write!
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