Swan Song

primrose,bluebell black briony, sleep well,my flower.. 'til Spring,will be

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2011 5:20:00 PM

Very impressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am not familiar with Black Briony..Will have to look that one up..Someone told me that I placed in your last contest that has been judged..On which page is it listed?..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/6/2011 3:01:00 PM

wanna read this again while playing debussy.. wow, brian! :) huggs, nette

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/6/2011 9:25:00 AM

A beautiful lullaby for the flowers feeling sleepy and would wake-up only when Spring would wake them again. Great write my friend with all the softness of flowers and music. I was about to send you a soup mail to know the result of my September Poem ‘While I was standing near My Autumn tree’ submitted for your contest, but no acknowledgement received. Hope you would kindly let me know. I am not very regular now days due to specific reasons but shall be delighted to hear from you. Regards..rkk