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she meets her final moment with a swan song for the ages. the theater is packed in like sardines. a cynosure of all eyes. her own stitched shut as she starts to sing. her face, baring tracks of trickling tears, flush with searing passion. her voice, quivering with raw emotion, reaches a crescendo. a final bow amid a thunderous standing ovation. sustained cheers and whistles from a captivated audience a celebrated soprano rings down the curtain. the end of an illustrious career. goodbye kisses abound. red roses catapult to the stage. a swan song to remember. Submitted for... Strong Emotions Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet Date written: 08/07/2022

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Date: 8/8/2022 5:25:00 AM
A swan song chocked with emotion. I can hear the echoes of the thunderous applause of the crowd bidding goodbye giving her a standing ovation ! Simply moving, dear Edward. My FAVE.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/8/2022 10:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback and fave, Valsa:-)
Date: 8/7/2022 4:28:00 PM
Hello Edward, she performed vey well in front of the crowd. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2022 11:10:00 AM
Hello Edward, I hop all is well with you. Blessing my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 6:20:00 PM
Thanks so much for the visit and comment, Darlene:-) Blessings to you as well!
Date: 8/7/2022 1:06:00 PM
A celebration in cheers of illustrious career---a standing ovation--that catapults your poem, Edward! Well done, indeed. Best to you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Date: 8/7/2022 12:11:00 PM
You captured the emotions of a final performance well Edward, I could hear the thunderous applause as she takes her final bow. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 12:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tom:-) I greatly appreciate you dropping by!
Date: 8/7/2022 10:12:00 AM
How deeply moving~your imagery the perfect performance! :)Paulette
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting, Paulette:-)

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