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Monet masterpiece … lilac lilies romantic rendezvous on pellucid pond beautiful blossom drifting down serene swans side by side glide gracefully pretty pen confident cob perfect plumage no fluffy feathers lifetime lovers protective parents 9,11,8,10,7, 9, 9 checked with how many syllables Alliterisen 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Image 4 chosen

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Marilene Evans

Date: 1/5/2022 10:21:00 PM

So beautifully penned. Congratulations. Blessings to you. Happy New Year and wishing you the best for 2022.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/5/2022 2:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful poem Jan. Magnificent! New year blessingsxxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 1/2/2022 7:55:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Jan , congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/2/2022 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day.....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2022 11:56:00 AM

Your version for swans was so lovely and sweet, jan. BIG congrats for your top win.

Joseph May

Date: 1/1/2022 8:53:00 AM

Wonderful write Jan, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2021 7:35:00 AM

Beautiful pen!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/16/2021 2:45:00 AM

I enjoyed this contest, your entry is perfectly lovely...Delice

Bill Baker

Date: 12/14/2021 4:39:00 PM

well written. Jan. your a master of the form. A poet friend, Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2021 4:02:00 PM

gorgeous alliteration, Jan. I gotta hurry and do this one

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/14/2021 10:33:00 AM

Well said! Most of us would rather see serene swans than bulls butt heads!

Laura Leiser

Date: 12/14/2021 10:18:00 AM

This verse is so exquisite and beautifully written, Jan! Love it! :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/14/2021 8:29:00 AM

Beautiful images Jan! Nice work on Alliteration!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/14/2021 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful - Love it. God bless you Jan. Love you, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/14/2021 6:16:00 AM

A wonderful poem. I happen to love water lilies and swan. Hugs.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/14/2021 5:35:00 AM

Your words float beautifully on the dynamic imagery you created. I enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Jan.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/14/2021 12:41:00 AM

A well composed alliteration Jan, great to see you back, hope alls well. Tom

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/13/2021 5:23:00 PM

Beautiful and stunning. Such a wonderful job of writing this contest. Alliterisen is very difficult, and you shine, Jan.