Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Swan Lake

Monet masterpiece … lilac lilies
romantic rendezvous on pellucid pond
beautiful blossom drifting down 
serene swans side by side glide gracefully 
pretty pen confident cob 
perfect plumage no fluffy feathers 
lifetime lovers  protective parents

9,11,8,10,7, 9, 9 checked with how many syllables

Alliterisen 2 Poetry Contest


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Marilene Evans January 5, 2022 at 10:21 PM So beautifully penned. Congratulations. Blessings to you. Happy New Year and wishing you the best for 2022.

Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2022 at 2:47 AM Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful poem Jan. Magnificent! New year blessingsxxoo

Eve Roper January 2, 2022 at 7:55 PM Beautiful verse, Jan , congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love

Paula Goldsmith January 2, 2022 at 8:08 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day.....................

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2022 at 11:56 AM Your version for swans was so lovely and sweet, jan. BIG congrats for your top win.

Joseph May January 1, 2022 at 8:53 AM Wonderful write Jan, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!

Caren Krutsinger December 17, 2021 at 7:35 AM Beautiful pen!

Delice Arleen Skelly December 16, 2021 at 2:45 AM I enjoyed this contest, your entry is perfectly lovely...Delice

Bill Baker December 14, 2021 at 4:39 PM well written. Jan. your a master of the form. A poet friend, Bill

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2021 at 4:02 PM gorgeous alliteration, Jan. I gotta hurry and do this one

Rico Leffanta December 14, 2021 at 10:33 AM Well said! Most of us would rather see serene swans than bulls butt heads!

Laura Leiser December 14, 2021 at 10:18 AM This verse is so exquisite and beautifully written, Jan! Love it! :)

Mike Gentile December 14, 2021 at 8:29 AM Beautiful images Jan! Nice work on Alliteration!!

Regina Mcintosh December 14, 2021 at 7:12 AM Beautiful - Love it. God bless you Jan. Love you, Gina

Victor Buhagiar December 14, 2021 at 6:16 AM A wonderful poem. I happen to love water lilies and swan. Hugs.

Vijay Pandit December 14, 2021 at 5:35 AM Your words float beautifully on the dynamic imagery you created. I enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Jan.

Tom Cunningham December 14, 2021 at 12:41 AM A well composed alliteration Jan, great to see you back, hope alls well. Tom

L Milton Hankins December 13, 2021 at 5:23 PM Beautiful and stunning. Such a wonderful job of writing this contest. Alliterisen is very difficult, and you shine, Jan.