Swan Lake

Gliding gracefully over the lake
pirouetting as their show begins
hundreds exquisitely take to the stage
for this their ballet is theirs to perform 
BITE SIZE POEM NO. 5

The ‘Liberum Divisa above is a four-line verse taken from a free verse poem of mine called ‘Suddenly Swans’ written on 6th April 2019

THIRD PLACE
Contest: Liberum Divisa
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden
5th May 2019

Contest BITE SIZE POEM NO. 5
Sponsor Line Gauthier

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Connie Marcum Wong

May 25, 2019 at 7:04 PM

Awesome imagery to envision in this lovely piece Ann. Congratulations on your podium win! : )

Ann Gilmour

May 27, 2019 at 10:39 AM

Many thanks Connie for your wonderful comments as I always appreciate your lovely visits. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

May 24, 2019 at 2:20 PM

Beautiful verse, Ann, congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Eve

Ann Gilmour

May 25, 2019 at 3:26 AM

Thank you Eve for your congrats and hugs, it is good to hear from you and I hope you are okay. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

May 5, 2019 at 7:42 AM

Exquisite imagery of swans ..wonderfully done, Ann.

Ann Gilmour

May 5, 2019 at 7:52 AM

Wow thank you so much Vijay for your wonderful comments! I truly appreciate your visit, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

May 5, 2019 at 6:25 AM

Ann, good luck in this contest. I do not know any of my poems well enough to recognize one that would qualify. As soon as I pop them down, I promptly forget most of them. Nice one for sure, both times!

Ann Gilmour

May 5, 2019 at 6:52 AM

Thanks Caren for your lovely comments and likewise I had to visit several poems before I decided on the swans. With kindest thoughts Ann xx