Swan Lake

Gliding gracefully over the lake pirouetting as their show begins hundreds exquisitely take to the stage for this their ballet is theirs to perform BITE SIZE POEM NO. 5 The ‘Liberum Divisa above is a four-line verse taken from a free verse poem of mine called ‘Suddenly Swans’ written on 6th April 2019 THIRD PLACE Contest: Liberum Divisa Sponsor: Gregory R Barden 5th May 2019 Contest BITE SIZE POEM NO. 5 Sponsor Line Gauthier

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2019 7:04:00 PM

Awesome imagery to envision in this lovely piece Ann. Congratulations on your podium win! : )

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/27/2019 10:39:00 AM

Many thanks Connie for your wonderful comments as I always appreciate your lovely visits. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/24/2019 2:20:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Ann, congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Eve

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/25/2019 3:26:00 AM

Thank you Eve for your congrats and hugs, it is good to hear from you and I hope you are okay. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/5/2019 7:42:00 AM

Exquisite imagery of swans ..wonderfully done, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 7:52:00 AM

Wow thank you so much Vijay for your wonderful comments! I truly appreciate your visit, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/5/2019 6:25:00 AM

Ann, good luck in this contest. I do not know any of my poems well enough to recognize one that would qualify. As soon as I pop them down, I promptly forget most of them. Nice one for sure, both times!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 6:52:00 AM

Thanks Caren for your lovely comments and likewise I had to visit several poems before I decided on the swans. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2019 6:18:00 AM

You did this very well Ann..

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 6:53:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit SO, it is good to see you again. With kindest thoughts Ann xx