Swan

Swan floating along
Water churned by its feet
Lily passing by

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Joe Maverick

December 6, 2025 at 9:46 AM

You are swanning along most Harmoniously Shadow with this Reflective piece.'

Shadow Hamilton

December 6, 2025 at 11:49 AM

ty Joe much appreciated your time in reading hugs Shadow

Zyrool Gifford

November 5, 2025 at 10:13 AM

Hello Shadow, A simply beautiful haiku. I love watching the swans, so elegant. Have a great day my friend.

Shadow Hamilton

November 22, 2025 at 12:58 PM

I love watching them too Zyrool beautiful birds Hugs Shadow

Valsa George

November 3, 2025 at 9:35 PM

Beautiful Haiku. I can visualize this scene.

Shadow Hamilton

November 22, 2025 at 12:56 PM

ty Valsa glad you enjoyed it hugs Shadow

Hilda Greenhough

November 3, 2025 at 8:52 PM

I was entranced by the motion. Motion and water are scintillating together. This is a happy picture.

Shadow Hamilton

November 22, 2025 at 12:55 PM

Hi Hilda sorry for belated response I am pleased you enjoyed it hugs Shadow

sara Etgen-Baker

October 28, 2025 at 3:17 PM

how lovely, a Haiku written from a swan's perspective. Brilliant! Faving

Shadow Hamilton

October 29, 2025 at 4:18 PM

ty Sara yes it turned out that way hugs Shadow

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2025 at 1:54 PM

I love this one!!

Shadow Hamilton

October 28, 2025 at 1:56 PM

ty Andrea for your time visiting my page hugs Shadow

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