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SWAN

Slowly floating down the
stream, the waterfowl glides
seamlessly along the
surface of the lake, its
soft, silky plumage, and
slender form, gracefully
sailing into the sun.

Copyright © Kahlani Steele | Year Posted 2024

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/3/2025 10:16:00 AM Hello Kahlani Steele, I love the swans. the swim so graceful on the lakes. Enjoy your day .My friend./Darlene/ Login to Reply

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 11/24/2024 8:18:00 AM This is simply a treasure many blessings Login to Reply Kahlani Steele Date: 11/24/2024 10:33:00 PM Thank you for your lovely comments ??

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/2/2024 5:23:00 PM This is gorgeous. The picture too. Congrats and let me tell you something in Soupmail Login to Reply Kahlani Steele Date: 11/2/2024 5:39:00 PM Thank you for your kind words, Andrea.

Maria Williams Date: 10/17/2024 9:08:00 PM I love swans Kahalini, and your poem describes them so well. Would by any chance you be observing the black swans of WA. I've seen a few in Sydney and they too are so beautiful and graceful. Thanks for sharing. Maria Login to Reply Kahlani Steele Date: 10/17/2024 10:31:00 PM Hi Maria, I wasn't observing the black swans although I do live in WA and have seen the black swans. You are correct, they are beautiful. I think all swans are graceful, except when they are chasing you!

Alesia Leach Date: 10/16/2024 2:46:00 PM Beautiful poem and love swans so graceful. Login to Reply Kahlani Steele Date: 10/16/2024 4:30:00 PM Thank you, Alesia. Yes, swans are graceful, and because of this, they are a fascinating topic to write about.

Jan Allison Date: 10/14/2024 2:57:00 PM what a stunning pleiades , i hope you share your passion for poetry with the little ones especially silly rhymes which is indeed poetry. i too love writing poems for children as i trained as a nursery nurse. but now writing humourous poems is my forte and i am self publishing my second book (but my toilet humour isn't everyone's cup of tea lol) https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/millie_millipede_-_nursery_rhyme_1335942 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/14/2024 3:19:00 PM oh how lovely you are punishing a childrens book, mine is naughty/ silly /bawdy/ poopy poetry and not suitable for children lol sorry for the confusion xx Kahlani Steele Date: 10/14/2024 3:08:00 PM Thank you, Jan. I've just started writing poetry again. I'm having too much fun trying out different forms of poetry to stick with one. I will check out your nursery rhyme book. I'm currently in the process of self publishing my own children's book. Thank you again for your lovely comments.

Len Gasun Date: 10/13/2024 11:28:00 PM I'm captivated by the beautiful image in your poem my dear poet friend. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply Kahlani Steele Date: 10/13/2024 11:46:00 PM Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. Feel free anytime to give me some constructive feedback as I'm always open to learning from the best.