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Swan

the swan gracefully moves across water
                     its feathers making a wake
                        path of serene ripples

Heidi Sands

9/28/19

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2019

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September 30, 2019 at 8:02 AM

Wonderfully crafted my friend.

September 30, 2019 at 8:36 AM

Thank you very much my friend :)

September 29, 2019 at 2:29 PM

Gorgeously depicted, Heidi. :) gw

September 30, 2019 at 8:36 AM

Thank you Gershon! I appreciate your comments and support :)

Caren Krutsinger

September 29, 2019 at 10:17 AM

Beautiful kimo; I can feel the swan's happiness as she glides.

September 29, 2019 at 10:21 AM

That is great to hear. I am glad you could feel that. Thank you :)

Regina Mcintosh

September 29, 2019 at 10:10 AM

Beautiful... I love swans, too. Bless you always

September 29, 2019 at 10:13 AM

Thank you. Bless you too :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 29, 2019 at 9:29 AM

Smooth Swam Swim! Very nice :) Have a good day. BTW, validate code was "sea" I loved it.

September 29, 2019 at 9:32 AM

Thank you Abdullah. That is nice about the code too! Have a nice day :)

September 29, 2019 at 8:18 AM

Beautiful poetry, Heidi.

September 29, 2019 at 8:21 AM

Thank you Vijay! I appreciate your comment today :)

September 29, 2019 at 6:37 AM

Lovely said my friend...true poetic rhythm...great descriptive kimo, Heidi...sending serene ripples of poetic love...^WW^ {*_J*}

September 29, 2019 at 7:02 AM

Thank you very much WW and also for the poetic ripples of love ! Have a nice day, my friend :)

September 29, 2019 at 5:42 AM

Lovely, serene imagery...

September 29, 2019 at 7:02 AM

Thank you Silent One :)

Connie Marcum Wong

September 28, 2019 at 9:51 PM

Lovely Heidi We have black swans here that simply enchant! : ) xxoo

September 28, 2019 at 10:54 PM

Wow, I don't think I have seen a black swan and the other day, I saw my first Albino white giraffe on video. Interesting. Thank you Connie :)

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