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Swamps are like places where dinosaurs roam shadowed by ancient moss-draped trees. A prehistoric world in shades of green. I paddle my pirogue through algae foam. Around me it's taciturn and serene as I collect for whittling, cypress knees. Fishermen, hunters, and I call it home. Nature's garden profuse with wildflowers; cattails and swamp iris in brown and blue. An alligator, inert near the banks. I sit and gaze at the beauty for hours. For my primitive domain, I give thanks - for the bass I caught, simmering in stew, and for herbs I use for healing powers. In the swamp, it's as if time has stood still. Under lily pads there lurks big bullfrogs hiding from herons and the egret. I can hear them calling out their trill. Time in my cabin I never regret. Life is peaceful in these foggy bogs. I ready myself for night's misty chill. Sinister snakes slither in shallow brine and cling to low branches overhead, trying to catch the last ray of sun. I descry them while checking my line then gather up moss, and when that's done, I will stuff it inside my mattress bed. Living in my swamp suits me just fine. _^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_ January 21st, 2016 Human Nature Contest Sponsor: Marugu Mo

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Date: 2/16/2016 5:23:00 PM
Impressive Human Nature-4 stanza,/7 lines..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:21:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Sara.
Date: 2/16/2016 1:59:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Lin.
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Date: 2/16/2016 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Upma.
Date: 2/13/2016 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations for your win! Awesome.
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Date: 2/13/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Susan.
Date: 2/13/2016 10:52:00 AM
Wonderful poem.Congrats Lin to win. Anisha D
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anisha.
Date: 2/12/2016 9:23:00 PM
Congrats Lin: Re-visiting to say well done. SuZ
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Suz.
Date: 2/12/2016 2:32:00 PM
Such amazing imagery and beautifully written, Lin. Congrats on your well-deserved 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/12/2016 6:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra Hugger!! lol
Date: 2/3/2016 1:18:00 AM
I wonder why I am craving craw fish? Delightful read, very well done and so enjoyable ... CayCay
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Date: 2/3/2016 4:17:00 AM
lol CayCay. I've missed seeing you. Hope you're well and thank you for the visit. We certainly do have great food in New Orleans.

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