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Swallows

Swallows - for the morphologically inclined No sheep to bumble about alone weighed down with individuality upon the ground we surge in sweet and singing swiftness across the sky shape-shifting all as one to sculpt the bright and empty air with wings of light

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Date: 4/8/2020 8:53:00 PM
Oh, to let our hearts take on the shape of Swallows and soar with swiftness across the sky. Thank You, JC Hawkens
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Date: 8/10/2019 7:56:00 PM
Nice Trudi Lee … certainly lines for the welcome swallows who entertain me from the back porch - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:29:00 PM
Your alliteration makes this metaphoric write even more classy!
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