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Jun-Jun Villanueva

Swallowed

Aureate burning sun - concealing, infested green nature's affluence.






                                      *    ^_^   *   MONOKU - Single Line Contest

Copyright © Jun-Jun Villanueva | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2011 at 12:34 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2011 at 8:21 PM

Way to go, Jun-Jun. congratulations!

June 5, 2011 at 6:03 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

June 4, 2011 at 10:24 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

June 3, 2011 at 11:42 PM

Congratulations on your win : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 3, 2011 at 8:32 PM

Congrats jun-jun on your super win with this creative entry for Rick.. enjoy another one luv.

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2011 at 10:33 PM

Good imagery to portray that title of "swallowed"!

Constance La France

June 2, 2011 at 7:52 PM

A lovely monoku, I hope you do well with this poem, I am sending you a soupmail in a moment ~~

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