Swager

Obsessed,
under influence by a gaze.
Amazed,
as I caress.
Blessed.

Blessed,
speaking in tongue, I graze.
Amazed,
as you undress.
Obsessed.

Jared Pickett
11/23/09
Asavvy1

on writing and wordsfree verse

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 30, 2009 at 8:51 AM

Yes, of course u are the cocky guy and of course I am that flirty girl.. us Geminis always flirt first and foremost... all in fun of course... but great inspiration u provide for these kinds of poetry from me.. I FEED off words like u present in your descriptive poetry... we are clicking well... should work great for collaboration purposes.. when ready, of course... luv "Sweetie"

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2009 at 4:18 AM

Wonderful poetry you present to us today Jared. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol

P Sheart

November 23, 2009 at 2:44 PM

Hi Jared, very passionate write. Keep writing! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

November 23, 2009 at 10:01 AM

Very, very nice, Jared! Would love to be the recipient of such a "gaze," but I'll be gazing longingly at a turkey in a few days (LOL). Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

November 23, 2009 at 9:18 AM

With permission I hope. Very passionate write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

November 23, 2009 at 8:07 AM

passionate..i wonder who has this effect on you Jared..excellent write-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 23, 2009 at 8:03 AM

Now who might this lucky one be that u are obsessed with today? excellent passionate poem.. just the way I like them... thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my words also.. Asavvy1 and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" make an early morning pair too good to miss... our swagers are on today ... lets keep sharing.. collaboration in the future??? luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

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