Swager

Obsessed, under influence by a gaze. Amazed, as I caress. Blessed. Blessed, speaking in tongue, I graze. Amazed, as you undress. Obsessed. Jared Pickett 11/23/09 Asavvy1

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2009 8:51:00 AM

Yes, of course u are the cocky guy and of course I am that flirty girl.. us Geminis always flirt first and foremost... all in fun of course... but great inspiration u provide for these kinds of poetry from me.. I FEED off words like u present in your descriptive poetry... we are clicking well... should work great for collaboration purposes.. when ready, of course... luv "Sweetie"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 4:18:00 AM

Wonderful poetry you present to us today Jared. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 11/23/2009 2:44:00 PM

Hi Jared, very passionate write. Keep writing! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/23/2009 10:01:00 AM

Very, very nice, Jared! Would love to be the recipient of such a "gaze," but I'll be gazing longingly at a turkey in a few days (LOL). Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2009 9:18:00 AM

With permission I hope. Very passionate write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2009 8:07:00 AM

passionate..i wonder who has this effect on you Jared..excellent write-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 8:03:00 AM

Now who might this lucky one be that u are obsessed with today? excellent passionate poem.. just the way I like them... thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my words also.. Asavvy1 and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" make an early morning pair too good to miss... our swagers are on today ... lets keep sharing.. collaboration in the future??? luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"