Swag 2

bodies drenched, in this r&b set. dirty dancing, twisting, grinding, glistening, our love sweat. We've just met!! dressed in blue, concentrating on you, admiring the way your hips move. Jared Pickett 11/21/09 Asavvy1

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 8:07:00 AM

Well now I am drenched reading your poem this morning... very passionate .. and dirty dancing to boot .. luv dancing.. its the next best thing to twisting, grinding, and glistening... (besides watching pro football)... and u just met her.. u must be a Scorpio.. excellent reading on a cloudy and rainy Monday in New Jersey... this poem woke me up real fast... thankxxx...luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2009 12:52:00 AM

lovely write indeed Savvy--Keep thew move:)Charma

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/21/2009 10:53:00 PM

Loved the line, "out love Sweat" nice work...Raul

Marty Owens

Date: 11/21/2009 10:38:00 PM

Very nice Jared...WOO HOO!!! Marty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/21/2009 1:58:00 PM

the dance swag? I was thinking about a Christmas swag at first nice work, enjoyed reading.

P Sheart

Date: 11/21/2009 11:08:00 AM

Jared, Sounds like the two of you hit it off instantly. Quite a sensous feel to the dance. Have have a great Thanksgiving and Holiday season. Love Light Patty Thanks for your comments.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 10:54:00 AM

Awesome, sensual and quite enticing, Jared! And to think you "just met"! Wow, I can feel my pulse starting to race as I read this. Very erotic! Love, Carolyn