Swag 2

bodies drenched,
in this r&b set.
dirty dancing, 
twisting, grinding,
glistening, 
our love sweat.

We've just met!!

dressed in blue,
concentrating on you,
admiring the way your hips move. 


Jared Pickett
11/21/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 23, 2009 at 8:07 AM
Well now I am drenched reading your poem this morning... very passionate .. and dirty dancing to boot .. luv dancing.. its the next best thing to twisting, grinding, and glistening... (besides watching pro football)... and u just met her.. u must be a Scorpio.. excellent reading on a cloudy and rainy Monday in New Jersey... this poem woke me up real fast... thankxxx...luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Chircop Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:52 AM
lovely write indeed Savvy--Keep thew move:)Charma
Moreno Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 10:53 PM
Loved the line, "out love Sweat" nice work...Raul
Owens Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 10:38 PM
Very nice Jared...WOO HOO!!! Marty
Culverhouse Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 1:58 PM
the dance swag? I was thinking about a Christmas swag at first nice work, enjoyed reading.
Sheart Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Jared, Sounds like the two of you hit it off instantly. Quite a sensous feel to the dance. Have have a great Thanksgiving and Holiday season. Love Light Patty Thanks for your comments.
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November 21, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Awesome, sensual and quite enticing, Jared! And to think you "just met"! Wow, I can feel my pulse starting to race as I read this. Very erotic! Love, Carolyn
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