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Svelt and Tight

Slim and trim, this guy's become Svelte with a butt that's tight as a drum Pumping iron A studly lion And if you believe that, better lay off the rum!

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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 8/27/2017 5:49:00 PM

I'm sure that was you in your early years Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/27/2017 6:01:00 PM

Actually used to be a big slob but have lost 48 lbs. since January! Now svelt and trim!!! YEE HAW!!! xxx

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/27/2017 11:55:00 AM

Thank god you are not too perfect. It would set you above all of us lesser beings and we might lose you to that rarified air. Mornin Jack!11

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/27/2017 12:21:00 PM

Then there's still help for youse normal people!!! LOL Mornin' Patricia... love and sweet hugs, Jake !!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/27/2017 8:57:00 AM

A fat man once went on a bender.//In the mirror he became very slender.//"The fat man is dumb,"//said that old demon, rum,//"like a battleship, he needs a tender!" PUMP ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/27/2017 9:02:00 AM

Soon be challenging Floyd Mayweather!!! HAVE A GREAT DAY, JOHN JOHN!!!