Svelt and Tight

Slim and trim, this guy's become Svelte with a butt that's tight as a drum Pumping iron A studly lion And if you believe that, better lay off the rum!
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Mason Gibbs Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 5:49 PM
I'm sure that was you in your early years Jack.
Ellison Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Actually used to be a big slob but have lost 48 lbs. since January! Now svelt and trim!!! YEE HAW!!! xxx
Cresswell Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Thank god you are not too perfect. It would set you above all of us lesser beings and we might lose you to that rarified air. Mornin Jack!11
Ellison Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Then there's still help for youse normal people!!! LOL Mornin' Patricia... love and sweet hugs, Jake !!! xxx
Flats Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 8:57 AM
A fat man once went on a bender.//In the mirror he became very slender.//"The fat man is dumb,"//said that old demon, rum,//"like a battleship, he needs a tender!" PUMP ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Soon be challenging Floyd Mayweather!!! HAVE A GREAT DAY, JOHN JOHN!!!
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