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Suzie

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I was thrilled as a peacock When Suzie blushed and agreed To come with me to the dance I bought her the most beautiful corsage My allowance money could buy With money leftover for a soda Tonight’s the night I’m going to ask Suzie to be my girl Submitted on September 29, 2019 for contest REALISM ART (PHOTO #1) sponsored by EVE ROPER - RANKED 3RD

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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2019 5:46:00 PM
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Nicely done, Line, thank you for participating in my contest, great write. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2019 5:56:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/29/2019 3:48:00 PM
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I love it because it is lovely
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2019 5:56:00 PM
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Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
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Elsia Elle
Date: 9/29/2019 7:41:00 AM
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simple, innocent, romantic - a pleasure for the reader !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2019 11:29:00 AM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Elsia.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2019 7:35:00 AM
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Very sweet. Well done :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2019 7:37:00 AM
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Thanks, Heidi.

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