Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Suzie

I was thrilled as a peacock
When Suzie blushed and agreed
To come with me to the dance

I bought her the most beautiful corsage
My allowance money could buy

With money leftover for a soda
Tonight’s the night
I’m going to ask Suzie to be my girl



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on September 29, 2019 for contest REALISM ART (PHOTO #1) sponsored by EVE ROPER  -  RANKED 3RD

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Eve Roper October 25, 2019 at 5:46 PM Nicely done, Line, thank you for participating in my contest, great write. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier October 25, 2019 at 5:56 PM Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire September 29, 2019 at 3:48 PM I love it because it is lovely Line Gauthier October 25, 2019 at 5:56 PM Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Elsia Elle September 29, 2019 at 7:41 AM simple, innocent, romantic - a pleasure for the reader ! Line Gauthier September 29, 2019 at 11:29 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Elsia.

Heidi Sands September 29, 2019 at 7:35 AM Very sweet. Well done :) Line Gauthier September 29, 2019 at 7:37 AM Thanks, Heidi.