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A swan sculpture (one of many) by the South Korean artist, Lee Sang-soo, who is renowned for his minimalist animal sculptures, which utilise fluid, ribbon-like forms to convey movement and elegance.


Suzette Swan Arc poem. See my atricle: 

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. the King’s Game protected by law but an aerodynamic l.a.w onto itself the swan’s landing approach an ungainly affair holding my b r e a t h in anticipation of an aborted landing much like a new LOVE affair: exhilarating but also apprehensive the g l i d i n g into familiar territory embracing the calm waters as its natural habitat lull a … in the relationship with nature and my emotional state e c h o e d spurred on by undetermined external forces that might have suggested a running l e a p— dreams take w i n g on blades that CLEAVE the a I r— bruised plumose memories long in the e x h a l i n g …

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Date: 6/8/2025 6:11:00 PM
Gosh, what a poem!!! I love how you made this metaphor all yours. "might have suggested a running l e a p— dreams take w i n g on blades that CLEAVE the a I r" wow
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Date: 6/8/2025 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Paige:)

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