Suteki ne

..for him 

   A little something in the 
 scintilla of soporific smiles you left me
 beneath dulcet gazing twirls
  of ballerina stars amongst a moonlit lullaby,
 sitting in the quixotic corners of my 
 magnolia mind unwrapping whimsical  
   sestina sensations of every
 enigmatic emotion 
  dreamt up in a sanguine spirit 

  "I love you,"
  a sonnet susurrus poem 
 you whispered into 
   vanilla velvet tunes of tranquility 
 hidden against ballad beats
 of fawn furtive fear
   of rhapsody rejection.. 
 A chuckle escapes my lips, 
 perhaps because you 
  don't seem to know the vesper vividly
 uplifting my reviere realm 
 of harmonic hymns, 
  watering my galvanic garden 
of emeralds and 
 pulchritudinous peonies
 in the withering winter wind.

  My vesper, 
 a chiaroscuro crescendo 
 in the marigold melodies 
  of my canvas,
 A diaphanous dove breezed
  our twinkling topaz 
   sending us a forbidden feather
 of a reckoning reality 
 drenching in nebulous nectar 
  flowing threnody thorns.
   Are we bound to be as
  sailing stars intertwined into a 
 chalice cosmic dance, 
  where a foreseeing forever
 results to fading slowly 
 as last sacred notes of a 
 virgin violin in cozy cynosure cottages
  among fowling fireflies 
 of a deep nocturnal night?

  Sweetheart,
 must one day I suffer 
 to bear this life of
  longing laminations 
 without your mystical 
   mellifluous mourn 
 to edify dissonant days
  with hallowing hope betwixt 
 dusky ocean shores of serenity,
 and seashells 
  of petal promises?

   Inside amaranthine labyrinth 
 madness and 
 cauldrons of drowning despair,
 you lied as a glimmering garnet
  of twilit tercets in an 
 aethereal autumn sky.   
 If I achieved my
   nirvana aurum and 
 rhinestone resolutions
 to pursue a
  gauze penumbra path
 cascading a forensic future, 
  be there alongside me,
 so we can create our own roses
   of eternity.

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Date: 9/27/2024 4:15:00 PM
Breathtaking. Amazing. What emotion, that comes from your pen... <3
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 10/2/2024 9:36:00 AM
yaaayyy she's here!! thanks for visiting Paige, nice to see you :))
Date: 9/23/2024 6:11:00 AM
Dear Peonieslore, What wonderful romantic language and alliterations. Love is a beautiful, complex experience that brings both joy and uncertainty. yes our hope is for a lasting connection and shared future with our beloved. - Well Inked! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/23/2024 5:27:00 AM
great words and aliterations, so enjoyable to read this, thanks poet
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Date: 9/23/2024 12:02:00 AM
Beautiful poetic words with great alliteration and imagery. I learned a new word today, 'penumbra'. A secondary shadow? The middle one being the Umbra, I'm guessing. In any case amazing poetry...Thanks for visiting my poem...Hugs
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Date: 9/22/2024 6:51:00 PM
Ah, you just did , I mean create your own roses of eternity, love this, your a seasoned poet of the highest order !
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Date: 9/22/2024 7:18:00 PM
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Date: 9/22/2024 1:14:00 PM
This is so heart-warming and beautiful. Astounding. You have a true talent.
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