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..for him A little something in the scintilla of soporific smiles you left me beneath dulcet gazing twirls of ballerina stars amongst a moonlit lullaby, sitting in the quixotic corners of my magnolia mind unwrapping whimsical sestina sensations of every enigmatic emotion dreamt up in a sanguine spirit "I love you," a sonnet susurrus poem you whispered into vanilla velvet tunes of tranquility hidden against ballad beats of fawn furtive fear of rhapsody rejection.. A chuckle escapes my lips, perhaps because you don't seem to know the vesper vividly uplifting my reviere realm of harmonic hymns, watering my galvanic garden of emeralds and pulchritudinous peonies in the withering winter wind. My vesper, a chiaroscuro crescendo in the marigold melodies of my canvas, A diaphanous dove breezed our twinkling topaz sending us a forbidden feather of a reckoning reality drenching in nebulous nectar flowing threnody thorns. Are we bound to be as sailing stars intertwined into a chalice cosmic dance, where a foreseeing forever results to fading slowly as last sacred notes of a virgin violin in cozy cynosure cottages among fowling fireflies of a deep nocturnal night? Sweetheart, must one day I suffer to bear this life of longing laminations without your mystical mellifluous mourn to edify dissonant days with hallowing hope betwixt dusky ocean shores of serenity, and seashells of petal promises? Inside amaranthine labyrinth madness and cauldrons of drowning despair, you lied as a glimmering garnet of twilit tercets in an aethereal autumn sky. If I achieved my nirvana aurum and rhinestone resolutions to pursue a gauze penumbra path cascading a forensic future, be there alongside me, so we can create our own roses of eternity.

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Date: 9/27/2024 4:15:00 PM
Breathtaking. Amazing. What emotion, that comes from your pen... <3
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 10/2/2024 9:36:00 AM
yaaayyy she's here!! thanks for visiting Paige, nice to see you :))
Date: 9/23/2024 6:11:00 AM
Dear Peonieslore, What wonderful romantic language and alliterations. Love is a beautiful, complex experience that brings both joy and uncertainty. yes our hope is for a lasting connection and shared future with our beloved. - Well Inked! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/23/2024 5:27:00 AM
great words and aliterations, so enjoyable to read this, thanks poet
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Date: 9/23/2024 12:02:00 AM
Beautiful poetic words with great alliteration and imagery. I learned a new word today, 'penumbra'. A secondary shadow? The middle one being the Umbra, I'm guessing. In any case amazing poetry...Thanks for visiting my poem...Hugs
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Date: 9/22/2024 6:51:00 PM
Ah, you just did , I mean create your own roses of eternity, love this, your a seasoned poet of the highest order !
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 9/22/2024 7:18:00 PM
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Date: 9/22/2024 1:14:00 PM
This is so heart-warming and beautiful. Astounding. You have a true talent.
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