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SUTAIH H * H I * I A * A T * T U * U S * S And then it unfolded like a zipper that opened teeth gaping through hollows worse for wear top stop loosened dichotomy schisms exposed slider with no way to go crying out for the past time for perspective and to turn over the page S * S U * U T * T A * A I * I H * H Am I missing something the aperture? Should I weigh in with an anagram or break the interruption suspend the breach mind the gap right there at the interval? DEPARTURE ENRAPTURE RECAPTURE CLOSURES JUNCTURE HARMONY Not everything broken needs to be mended paradigms shift chasm is there for a reason an open wise person searches new meaning when things fall apart and repairs breakage who needs a zipper when needle and thread play with buttons and rearranges their needs 06th February 2021

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Date: 2/24/2021 8:03:00 AM
Kai, congratulations on your win in the contest with this creative poem _ Constance
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/25/2021 2:16:00 AM
Thank you for your praise. Filling the gaps ...
Date: 2/8/2021 3:38:00 AM
Creative work. Way to go. Seems like there is a contest about Hiatus if so this reads like a good contender. Sara
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/9/2021 3:14:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 2/6/2021 9:09:00 AM
very nice zippered shape and message here esp. the last stanza - love those last two lines :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/9/2021 3:13:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Kind wishes, Kai

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