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A view of the ordinary, becomes the exception Each glass puddles grief, made of iced, liquefied Two have succumbed to the dark brimming tides Three without umber, are bronzed into gold Reviewed in formation, saluting in rows, toast stands at attention, to satisfy souls _________________ 4/6/15 Sumitted For Giorgio's Contest: Ekphrasis 01

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Date: 5/6/2015 6:13:00 PM
Creative way to go with this winning work!!Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:57:00 AM
Carrie, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/5/2015 6:24:00 PM
Nice, Carrie! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/5/2015 2:54:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:29:00 AM
Good work and an unbelievable level of talent shown here. I will definitely come checking more of your work.
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:00:00 PM
wow, carrie, you are so smart to figure out how to do this one. A challenge I could not dare to even try!! It's a class act!
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