Carrie Richards Poet Ekphrasis

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Sustenance

A view of the ordinary, becomes the exception

Each glass puddles grief, made of iced, liquefied

Two have succumbed to the dark brimming tides

Three without umber, are bronzed into gold

Reviewed in formation, saluting in rows,

toast stands at attention, to satisfy souls  
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4/6/15
Sumitted For Giorgio's Contest: Ekphrasis 01

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Sara Kendrick May 6, 2015 at 6:13 PM Creative way to go with this winning work!!Congrats!!Sara

Skat A May 6, 2015 at 9:57 AM Carrie, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*

Sandra Haight May 5, 2015 at 6:24 PM Nice, Carrie! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A May 5, 2015 at 2:54 PM Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Funom Makama April 20, 2015 at 8:29 AM Good work and an unbelievable level of talent shown here. I will definitely come checking more of your work.

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2015 at 6:00 PM wow, carrie, you are so smart to figure out how to do this one. A challenge I could not dare to even try!! It's a class act!