Sustenance

Though sun and rain sustain a tree
And coax it to maturity,
For humans that is not enough;
To grow, we need more complex stuff.

For we require the kind of care
And nurturing to help prepare
Us for the challenges we’ll face
When fortune slips from our embrace.

With luck, we’ll know within our core 
That we are loved; with that in store,
Our sustenance will help us be
As tall and mighty as a tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:43 PM
My favorite part "With luck, we’ll know within our core That we are loved; with that in store,"
Anaya Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Nurturing with care, a prerequisite for the wellness of youth, is for sure-don't forget a bookshelf. Starting today! Beautiful.
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:44 PM
Really?! I dunno. Just gimme sunshine, rain, and squirrels running up and down my arms. I'll be just fine. Crawly
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 11:58 AM
I especially love the middle stanza Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx may we both continue to grow and flourish on Poetry soup for a good few more years:-) hugs Jan xx
Brotherton Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Ilene, your words are so profound. Love is the roots that feed our souls.
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