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If only your heart could hop, as a frog to aim away from the tedium of the daily slog. Allow love to be the genuine treasure. Your selected spot atop the magic tether Trying to outlive your expected lifespan power with full belief, as an amphibian. It linked choice and chance in dancing. Alongside, a dreamy lake of romancing. An ocean of words is now utterly dry. Each phrase exists under the sky. I have viewed them dying in my mind. No path out or hope, I'm fearful of what to find. Flow and feelings were obsolete. You'll be dying laughing as you start retreat. This is the writer's "block-mayday" warning, when ideas become too thick for moaning. The firm-moving hazes took a scenic route. Amid the chaos, cinders crumble into the soot. The spirit is gone round on by a whirl of time. In quest of the North Star in the beauty prime. never-ending race-attempting dashing. to draw a fictional approach to finishing. wiping your eyes and setting boldface on it. Whatever transpires, foster hope and wit.
Written: November 27, 2022

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Date: 11/28/2022 9:03:00 PM
"If only your heart could hop, as a frog to aim away from the tedium of the daily slog. Allow love to be the genuine treasure." The very opening of the poem is charged with so much positivity and it is ringing loud with a beautiful message ! You amaze me with your prolific output and its quality, dear friend !
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Date: 11/28/2022 5:05:00 AM
What an upbeat message my friend: Whatever transpires, foster hope and wit. I like the positivity of your poem.
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