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Sustainable Rice Maidens

Sustainable rice maidens Lying in the grass Surely they don't see me Putting them in my past Having flown a thousand carpets I know how fast is fast Falling down dark doors Sideways without a crash Sustainable rice maidens Groan lonely 'neath the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 1:30:00 AM
I like line five. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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