Sustainable Rice Maidens

Sustainable rice maidens
Lying in the grass
Surely they don't see me
Putting them in my past
Having flown a thousand carpets
I know how fast is fast
Falling down dark doors
Sideways without a crash 
Sustainable rice maidens
Groan lonely 'neath the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 1:30 AM
I like line five. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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