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Suspended Life

Sometimes when you try to give someone the world, you wind up giving too much. Your head begins to swirl when their gone, because you crave their touch. Your heart will break in two, and you feel like your world has ended. When you've done all you can do, and it's no use. Your life feels suspended.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving poetry being featured this week Julie. Love, Carol
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Julie Hill
Date: 9/27/2012 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Carol. It means a great deal to me. The positive comments that I've received have been very uplifting. I am so honored to have such talented poets and people to comment on my work.

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