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Suspended In Animation

don’t call him a baby... don’t make fun of his tears... his soul’s tender — he runs and hides, under a chromatic beanbag with a dark emotional spectrum. when he returns to play Sleeping Queens,* he sniffles, wipes tears on his sleeve (and yours) “You hurt my feelings.” you find yourself not unlike the Road Runner** sailing off a cliff — suspended in animation. the reward of leaning in, hearing what this little soul has to say, realizing your fool mistake, this time taking the time to explain what his limited mind can take, then you hug the stuffings out of the little ruffian*** but only if you can catch him. 10/24/2019 *Card Game **Cartoon ***Here ruffian is used as a term of endearment

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Date: 10/27/2019 3:36:00 PM
So hard to slow down and remember, life is a cartoon, we need to be okay with that... lol... hugs... catch him if you can.. ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2019 3:47:00 PM
Complexity of life makes it interesting! :)
Date: 10/25/2019 8:43:00 AM
This is so good. I very much enjoyed. Hugs Rick.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!
Date: 10/24/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for taking me on an adventure with this precious, precocious ruffian, and thanks for the lesson/reminder at the end. Peace, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2019 10:06:00 PM
Thank you! Blessings to you, dear poet!
Date: 10/24/2019 11:42:00 AM
Darling poem, Kim! Do you have grandkids? My granddaughter was born two days ago and I’m excited to meet her soon! Little ones are the best! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2019 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura! Yes, I’ve been blessed with six. The youngest has me wrapped around his finger. I am excited for you, grandma :)
Date: 10/24/2019 10:55:00 AM
I know exactly what you mean, I have been in this situation before. Not under the beanbag but looking down at the tears.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2019 11:14:00 AM
Yes...lol! Sometimes we want to hide under the beanbag.
Date: 10/24/2019 7:11:00 AM
Cute pos. Kim. I enjoyed reading . Hugs, Catie :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2019 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Catie! Hugs...Kim

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