Suspended In Animation

don’t call him a baby...
don’t make fun of his tears...
his soul’s tender —
he runs and hides,
under a chromatic beanbag
with a dark emotional spectrum.

when he returns to play Sleeping Queens,* he
sniffles, wipes tears on his sleeve (and yours)
“You hurt my feelings.”

you find yourself not unlike the Road Runner**
sailing off a cliff —
suspended in animation.

the reward of leaning in,
hearing what this little soul has to say,
realizing your fool mistake,
this time taking the time
to explain what his limited mind
can take,
then you hug the stuffings
out of the little ruffian*** 
but only if you can catch him.

10/24/2019

*Card Game
**Cartoon
***Here ruffian is used as a term of endearment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 27, 2019 at 3:36 PM
So hard to slow down and remember, life is a cartoon, we need to be okay with that... lol... hugs... catch him if you can.. ann
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Complexity of life makes it interesting! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:43 AM
This is so good. I very much enjoyed. Hugs Rick.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Thanks for taking me on an adventure with this precious, precocious ruffian, and thanks for the lesson/reminder at the end. Peace, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Thank you! Blessings to you, dear poet!
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Darling poem, Kim! Do you have grandkids? My granddaughter was born two days ago and I’m excited to meet her soon! Little ones are the best! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations, Laura! Yes, I’ve been blessed with six. The youngest has me wrapped around his finger. I am excited for you, grandma :)
Green Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:55 AM
I know exactly what you mean, I have been in this situation before. Not under the beanbag but looking down at the tears.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Yes...lol! Sometimes we want to hide under the beanbag.
Lindsey Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Cute pos. Kim. I enjoyed reading . Hugs, Catie :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 7:16 AM
Thanks, Catie! Hugs...Kim
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