Susie the Tiny Angel

She was the smallest of all the angels
although all the other angels were at 
least five feet tall, 
Susie the angel was no larger than a Barbie doll.

She was by far the cutest of all the Angels
but little Susie was a little sad this Christmas Season.

She had wings that's for sure, so she could reach
the top of Christmas trees but the toppers
were always too heavy which made Susie sad.

She spoke to the other Angels about it
of course they all offered to help her.
Susie explained she was thankful
but she really wanted to do it on her own.

That's when it happened Susie 
right then and there became the first
Angel to shed a tear.

She had turned so no one saw, 
but Susie felt badly.

The next day while alone Susie
thought of her troubles and it happened
again, except this time it was many tears.

"Wait" Susie thought "my tears sparkle".
So she thought more about her sadness.
More and more tears flowed.
That is when Susie realized this was all meant to be.

The next morning Susie visited her favorite homes
as she flew over the trees and spread her tears.

From that day on their were changes.
All Christmas trees would sparkle with 
the glitter of Susie's magic.

Susie wasn't sad at all she wasn't even crying.
She had been picked to be the Christmas Angel.
The one that made all trees sparkle.

Now Susie no longer worried about placing toppers.

To honor Susie changes were made to Christmas trees.
They were topped with a star that resembled her tears
or a small Angel just like Suzie, one that made
the whole tree glitter.

02~12~2014
Sponsor: Carol Eastman
Contest Name: Children's Christmas or Holiday Tale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/26/2014 12:59:00 AM
Very heartwarming poem!
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Date: 12/12/2014 6:33:00 PM
I can easily see this charming, whimsical poem being made into a children's book... Nicely done, Maurice! Congrats on your win with this magical write!
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:07:00 AM
I spontaneously enjoyed Susie.
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:34:00 AM
Hie Maurice! Such a sweet and festive writing piece. It's inspirational, too.
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Date: 12/7/2014 8:13:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Maurice.
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Date: 12/7/2014 2:04:00 PM
The tiniest angel needed to meet Robert Hinshaw's littlest elf, I think! Well done, a great story! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:11:00 PM
This is super story and thanks for the enlightment; definitely a fav,congrats on the win Maurice...huggs
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:03:00 PM
Maurice, I enjoyed your sweet story about Susie Angel. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:36:00 AM
Quite a creative write, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:34:00 AM
I enjoyed this sparkling piece.
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:23:00 PM
Charming! Innovative & sweet! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:15:00 PM
A tender little tale, Maurice. Worthy of the first place win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:14:00 PM
Beautiful story...congrats on your win
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:39:00 PM
Maurice, wonderful story, a 7 and congratulations on a great win. Blessings and oxox eve
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Date: 12/5/2014 3:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/3/2014 3:31:00 PM
wow, you are super creative this season, Maurice. I love how you produced such a charming Christmas tale. I bet you told such wonderful stories to your daughters when they were young.
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Date: 12/3/2014 2:36:00 AM
Absolutely delightful write my friend - it made me smile - thank you my friend - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:41:00 PM
Beautiful story of hope my friend
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:41:00 PM
I love my Susie angel on my tree. She always looks down and smiles at me. Sweet story Maurice.
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:29:00 PM
This was charming!
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Date: 12/2/2014 9:40:00 PM
Fantastic write Maurice! Carol is goin to luv it for sure! gl in contest!
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