Susceptibility

Why? Tell me why?
I ponder why you avoid me?
Couldn't  you see!?
I love you till I die..
I cannot see you, yet I see I.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:00 PM
A very heartfelt plea! Nice to see your poem today.
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 12:21 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting. Your view means a lot to me. You are a big poetess in my view that I think we both see.
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