Susana's Melody

Susana played a flaunting tune,

That lingered near the haunting moon,

The song was tragic, sad ,and sour,

Which filled her with the darkest power,

And when her song was over and done,

She knew she had the best of fun,

For when her mother scurried in,

There was a floating violin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kovrlija Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 1:06 AM
Lovely poem!
J.T. Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 11:51 AM
i like this poem. nicely done - JH
Roberts Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Loved it ... Seren
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