Survivor

Peaceful, and Silent is the world as gentle wind Flows through my hair A turning ice cream cone appears in the distance sky Rumbling, I run for miles and miles Faster and faster, finally Allowing the wind to grab out at me And Wrap its self around me Devoured by the ice cream cone Walls of black covered the wonders of hope I tried to get a grip of the last bit of light Love, determination, and the Urge to survive, Powered me to follow my dreams and Get hold of that last bit of light I’ve waited my whole life The new me as arrived Afraid of nothing and ready to face The harsh world Once again A survivor lives

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Skat A

Date: 3/29/2014 4:48:00 PM

SUDHA, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/26/2014 11:17:00 AM

Sudha, survivors are very impressive, your poem conveys the light at the end, congratulations on your win, thanks for entering my contest, so sorry about the delay saying so.

Sudha Rose
Date: 4/2/2014 5:26:00 PM

Thank you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/22/2014 10:18:00 PM

Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, sudha

Sudha Rose
Date: 4/2/2014 5:24:00 PM

thankyou so much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 11:58:00 PM

Sudha:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2014 5:03:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sudha :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2014 8:07:00 PM

Sudha, wow, this poem relives... , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"