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Survival of the Fittest

Nesting season will soon be over Fledglings are peeking over the edges Yearning to join their parents in flight Nesting season will soon be over, While feral cats await like ugly vultures Innocent young chicks unknowing descend Nesting season will soon be over Fledglings are peeking over the edges. Innocent young chicks unknowing descend On fluttering wings, ill-prepared to fly Until darkness hides them in thick hedges Innocent young chicks unknowing descend Mother Nature spares only the strongest While the weaker chicks are doomed Innocent young chicks unknowing descend On fluttering wings, ill-prepared to fly. While the weaker chicks are doomed The stronger climb inside the camouflage Flapping their wings to gain strength, While the weaker chicks are doomed Sunrise, they leap from the covering green Flapping with all their might, take flight While the weaker chicks are doomed The stronger climb inside the camouflage. [Interlocking Triolets inspired by a poem using the form by Emile Pinet] Written May 16, 2021

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Date: 5/18/2021 6:49:00 AM
An excellent poem and read, I really enjoyed it.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Terry. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. I loved writing it.
Date: 5/18/2021 5:05:00 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/18/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. I always enjoy your comments.
Date: 5/17/2021 11:59:00 AM
Very impressive, Milton. Nicely descriptive of emerging chicks. // Barry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Barry. I appreciated your visit and your encouragement.
Date: 5/17/2021 2:26:00 AM
Superb write, Milton, with interlocking lines!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 9:06:00 AM
Unseeking Seeker, thanks so much for your read.
Date: 5/16/2021 8:34:00 PM
Nature's law of survival of the fittest is well portrayed in this sad, but captivating poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Evelyn, for your thoughtful comment. I always appreciate hearing from you!
Date: 5/16/2021 8:29:00 PM
So sad for the weaker chicks. I can imagine all of them flapping with all their might . You have described this vividly. Well done.:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/17/2021 9:05:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi, for your kind thoughts. I see this every spring. It makes me sad, but such is the way of Mother Nature!
Date: 5/16/2021 8:04:00 PM
This is so well expressed. A sad reality but one that is necessary to preserve the strongest genes. Thanks for your visit Milton.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/16/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Thanks for yours.

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